Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Period 8 Poems

Post 3 of your poems as comments under your class period. Make sure to give yourself credit by, at the least, signing your poem with your first name or initials.

59 comments:

Unknown said...

1. Drama: big thing in this world.

2. Bullying with no stop to it.

3. My niece: a bundle of smiles.

-tm

devan said...

1.The first shot,always the hardest


2.Falling only to see the ground


3.My dog's death, my heart's death


DL-

Amanda said...

1. New house; dont know whats happening.

2. I was sad when they died.

3. My parents got divorced; I worried.

-Amanda

john said...

1. I was good then got hurt.

2. Why oh why did he die?

3. Got a car then wrecked it.


J.K

Unknown said...

1.THey pass and we miss alot.

2.Broken bone hurts cried for days.

3.My family loving we stand togther.


megan

brenda said...

1. So sad.He won't call me.

2. Very scared of the hurtful dog.

3. Loves to do anything with him.





Brenda

Unknown said...

Zach

1. A death of a pet bad moments

2. Wilderness in the woods very nice moments

3. sports is joy and happier moments

john said...

tyler

your right thare is alot of drama in this world i like that one dude good job

Unknown said...

1. nothing is wors than haveing pain.

2. rage brings nothing but more truble.

3. death doesn't bring joy but sadness.
-DC

Unknown said...

1. Life is just like a rollcoaster.

2. Life is really fun to enjoy.

3. Never miss a dream you want.

-Joshua

Anonymous said...

1.Most of my family members are dead

2.My cousins wedding was beautiful

3.I think grandma puppy is cute





A.R

Unknown said...

devan i like how u put the death of ur dog like it realy killed u i am vary sorry about ur dog it would hurt me if my dog abby died

john said...

amanda i like the one whare u said u got a new house but i no what happens u move in haha

Amanda said...

tyler i liked how you talked about your neice, she always makes you smile.

devan my dog died a couple of years ago so i could just imagine how you feel.

john it must of hurt when u hurt ur leg. i would hate to use a wheel chair all the time.

Unknown said...

1. Papa past away hard for all 2. 6 stiches under eye looked funny. 3. I broke my wrest snowboarding. owch justin

Unknown said...

breanda i like how u put ur boyfriend in there now i wish i put mine in there lol thanks for times next time

devan said...

tyler-

i liked how you said stuff about drama, it is a big issue.
one suggestion i have is capitalize your initials.
i noticed you used the the poetic device:line break.

from Devan

Unknown said...

tyler i like how you said big thing in this world.

Unknown said...

tyler i like your poems, because its true and its can relate to alot of peoople

john said...

zach

your right sports are great well u said joy but same thing but good job bud

Unknown said...

justin like ur poams are brains put together it makes a goood team lol

Unknown said...

jhon i like how you hunt to get hunt

Unknown said...

buttercupgirl1417 i like your peom because it has a deep meaning andi can realy under stand on what u mean

Unknown said...

buttercup there you hunt crid days

Anonymous said...

buttercupgirl
you are vary deep I like it alot you did vary good analizing.

Unknown said...

tyler i like how you give details about like drama is big

Unknown said...

tyler,

i liked how u based this on drama and u gave detail on what it is about

Dilan,

i liked how u did this on pain its all true and i would end up like that someday good job!!!

Unknown said...

tyler i like how you give details about like drama is big

brenda said...

magen, I really liked the way you sound like you do care about other people and how they feel in their lives.

Jon, I really like the way you said stuff you got and then you said what you did you the thing

Amanda, I like the way you talked about what happen in your life.

Liz said...

dear devan,

i really like your second poem its so true in fact but also true through spirit.That is so true i likr it so much!!

Unknown said...

hey john i think that those r great poems

Anonymous said...

1.riding horses i feel happy,free

2. I am strong because I'm idependent

3.warmth of the sun beating down

MB

Anonymous said...

dear megan i liked how you used imagery
el

dear devan i liked how you talked about your dog
el

dear amanda i love how you talked about your new house
el

MB said...

their is a lot of drama in the world

MB

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devan said...

dear amanda i liked how you talked about your parents devvorced mine are divorced to it gets sad sometimes.


dear emily i liked how your setup in the poems are.

jbashaw said...

1. my mom, my dad loves me

2. my doctor, my denstist feel me

3. my dog, my cat heart me

kody said...

1.My snowmobile is fast on the snow.

2.THe cold makes me really cold.

3.i like to building big building

kody said...

tyler ur poems are preety nice to all the things that happen to the school withwe need to have a stop to them

jbashaw said...

tyler you are right about bullying never stops

Melon aka dylan said...

Bang it runs then its dinner

Heart beats fast goes even faster

real it in it is big

Kennedy said...

Life really bites,bite it back.

Jared said...

1. For sale: dog leash, barley used.
2. Family scrapbooks are thiner than paper.
3.Freinds phone number fill one page.

Kennedy said...

Don't waste time thinking about.

NB said...

Nicole said...
The day god called u home

tears fall, still hurting, now stoping

your death now my hearts death

Bailey said...

1.Blood poured from my broken head
2.When did you peel the bannana
3.I got my Jr.Black Belt

Kennedy said...

Some times are tough, oh well.

garrett said...

1.I miss my real friends, really!
2.School is so sad,WHY!
3.The marriage of my mom!

kody said...

hey melon head dylan wat do your poems reallhy mean

melon aka dylan said...

yo this is off the hizzzy great job

scott said...

Jump for joy, school is done.

New York Giants, Superbowl champians again.

Food is my very good friend.

Bethany said...

1.It doesn't matter anymore, aboutt anything
2.Hate is powerless; but love is strong
3.Pain:13 stitches in the head.OUCH!:D

Ethan said...

1)So fun. Not.So very boring.

2)Great. Another Monday. Wish today's Friday

3)Netbooks fun. School. So not!.

Anonymous said...

I hate the drama at fa

I hate people being bullyed here

people need to be nice here

-CB

Anonymous said...

school....boring but its life
dog dying..now what to do
pain hurts don't want to cry

EL

Anonymous said...

tyler I agree with youthe drama is a big thing
Now with the bullying doesn't have any stop to it and it need to stop
and Ibet your niece is a budle of smiles
-cmb

Tao said...

1. Poems: hard, not fun, not easy.

2. Football: hard, tiring, hurts, injury, fun.

3. Graphic novels: action, violence, pictures, fun.

--Tao