8th Graders share their 6-word poetry memoirs after completing a unit on poetic devices and poetry analysis.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
Period 2 Poems
Post 3 of your poems as comments under your class period. Make sure to give yourself credit by, at the least, signing your poem with your first name or initials.
55 comments:
Love him hates me he's gone!
Love him lost him hate him!
Shes dead gone forever miss her!
Been searching for a while. found him.
I wanna be with him forever.
Always searching. Never found. Finally did.
1. I lost him: not knowing why?
2. He just left without saying goodbye.
3. Does anyone care about your feelings?
4. What if he doesn't come back?
-Kenzie
1. Darkness harsh; cold, screaming voices.
2. Sound of the world creaking to...
3. Playing basebal: 1, 2, 3, home.
4. Foot steps; clickety-clak clickety-clak.
--J.Shantie
1. Believed you, did you believe me?
2. Love's fake; it's just a chemical.
3. Friendship always lasts, love never does.
--ryan
britt i like how put your thought in to it
Kendra,
I like how you kinda did the same things i did(: Hahaa.. We thnk alike!
Britt,
I like how you did the "I wanna be with him forever!" haha.. Its nice.
Shawn,
I think your brave to put how your father died.
Ryan,
Your poems are very nice. I like how you say something that is actually true!
Kenzie Your A Heart Braker Lol Jk :)
i really like how you said that i was brave to but my dad in it
Britt i loves yours :)
Kenzie I LOVE Youh :)
Kenzie,
if he dosent come back you keep moving forward
:)
Have you have any one who died
Ryan,
Aww thanks(:
Shawn,
No i havent had anyone die in my family.. I dont know what i would do with out anyone.. Was it hard when He died?
no problem kenzie
i do that alot
Kenzie Your An Awesome Pome Writer :0 I LOVE YOUH :)
1. I never knew how you acted.
2. How can i trust you anymore?
-Kenzie
1. My dad died of a disease.
2. I had a good bithday; hurry.
3. I hate ELA: in school forever.
--S.G.
kenzie
nice poems life is hard to get a grab on hehe
pancakes
hehe
1. My father passed away in 2002.
2. Mom is both parents to me.
3. I missed my father, really, intensely.
--T.E.
Kenzie, I like how your poem stands out by saying he just left without saying goodbye
1. My birthday is April Fools day!
2. I have a bunch of animals.
3. I like math class and science.
--M.L.M.
He is the one i love!
Hes the guy i wished for.
Forever and always together forever promise
1. My skills are super duper amazing
2. I don't watch from the sidelines
3. I climb the biggest mountains always
1 I have became a stronger person.
2 My mother has raised me great.
3 my father makes my life better.
1.Going hunting very great first deer.
2.Being born little baby very cute.
3.Living on farms cows crazy animals.
1. Sports are my life my inspiration.
2. Friends are like dogs they're amazing
3. Pets are awesome just like me
1. Xbox-360,hanging out,with friends.
2. Being born loving parents,my sports.
3.My sports, are Football, and Basketball
fall hard, get up, start again.
lifes wild ride, I love it
never too old to follow dreams...
Ryan i ove your 3 6 word poems they are true and you just have to look and love will exsists
i have secrets to hide myself
different.shy.behind my friends.yes!
i cover myself with some humor.
1.I want to go to army
2.I act as my friends do
3.I lovr my family and friends
Love: powers everything in my mind.
No one can live without love.
Art i can't live without it.
music tells my whole true self.
jayme,
i love how you said super duper amazing :) just because u are :)
AG like how you said it about hunting i love hunting!!!!!!!!!!!
hannah! your poem made me inspired!!
1. Things i love about him!
2. I love him and he loves me!
3. Whats not to love about love!
hannah i like yours alot because i think when people fall they should get right back up and try what ever they are doing again :)
hahaha jayme yes your skills are the best haha :)
KAT,
i love how you love music, so do I :) you did great on your poems :)
Mykayla that is cool how u said people are like dogs they are amazing dogs are a mans best friend:]
hannah i like your smiley face :)
Hannah love the last one u wrote
mykayla brand is the anonymous person that wrote about jayme
matt i like football and basketball to so good luck with them sports.
ryan
I like your poems because the way you said friend ship lasts love dont.And your language the way you rote it. TE
1. I go outside with friends, Brr!
2. I always have something to do.
3. WE go to the same places.
--R.H.
James,
i really liked your first poem because its sounds like a horror movie.
R. h.
Ryan
i liked the 3 one because it reminded me from when my sister went threw with what you typed.
gobin,
i agree with the one, have you ever had any one who died remebered me of our dog and cat that died long ago.
I had him then lost him
I Miss hin and need him
loved him lost him hate him
he left without saying good-bye
i will always love him forever
hes the man of my dreams <3
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