8th Graders share their 6-word poetry memoirs after completing a unit on poetic devices and poetry analysis.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
Period 8 Poems
Post 3 of your poems as comments under your class period. Make sure to give yourself credit by, at the least, signing your poem with your first name or initials.
i liked how you said stuff about drama, it is a big issue. one suggestion i have is capitalize your initials. i noticed you used the the poetic device:line break.
tyler I agree with youthe drama is a big thing Now with the bullying doesn't have any stop to it and it need to stop and Ibet your niece is a budle of smiles -cmb
59 comments:
1. Drama: big thing in this world.
2. Bullying with no stop to it.
3. My niece: a bundle of smiles.
-tm
1.The first shot,always the hardest
2.Falling only to see the ground
3.My dog's death, my heart's death
DL-
1. New house; dont know whats happening.
2. I was sad when they died.
3. My parents got divorced; I worried.
-Amanda
1. I was good then got hurt.
2. Why oh why did he die?
3. Got a car then wrecked it.
J.K
1.THey pass and we miss alot.
2.Broken bone hurts cried for days.
3.My family loving we stand togther.
megan
1. So sad.He won't call me.
2. Very scared of the hurtful dog.
3. Loves to do anything with him.
Brenda
Zach
1. A death of a pet bad moments
2. Wilderness in the woods very nice moments
3. sports is joy and happier moments
tyler
your right thare is alot of drama in this world i like that one dude good job
1. nothing is wors than haveing pain.
2. rage brings nothing but more truble.
3. death doesn't bring joy but sadness.
-DC
1. Life is just like a rollcoaster.
2. Life is really fun to enjoy.
3. Never miss a dream you want.
-Joshua
1.Most of my family members are dead
2.My cousins wedding was beautiful
3.I think grandma puppy is cute
A.R
devan i like how u put the death of ur dog like it realy killed u i am vary sorry about ur dog it would hurt me if my dog abby died
amanda i like the one whare u said u got a new house but i no what happens u move in haha
tyler i liked how you talked about your neice, she always makes you smile.
devan my dog died a couple of years ago so i could just imagine how you feel.
john it must of hurt when u hurt ur leg. i would hate to use a wheel chair all the time.
1. Papa past away hard for all 2. 6 stiches under eye looked funny. 3. I broke my wrest snowboarding. owch justin
breanda i like how u put ur boyfriend in there now i wish i put mine in there lol thanks for times next time
tyler-
i liked how you said stuff about drama, it is a big issue.
one suggestion i have is capitalize your initials.
i noticed you used the the poetic device:line break.
from Devan
tyler i like how you said big thing in this world.
tyler i like your poems, because its true and its can relate to alot of peoople
zach
your right sports are great well u said joy but same thing but good job bud
justin like ur poams are brains put together it makes a goood team lol
jhon i like how you hunt to get hunt
buttercupgirl1417 i like your peom because it has a deep meaning andi can realy under stand on what u mean
buttercup there you hunt crid days
buttercupgirl
you are vary deep I like it alot you did vary good analizing.
tyler i like how you give details about like drama is big
tyler,
i liked how u based this on drama and u gave detail on what it is about
Dilan,
i liked how u did this on pain its all true and i would end up like that someday good job!!!
tyler i like how you give details about like drama is big
magen, I really liked the way you sound like you do care about other people and how they feel in their lives.
Jon, I really like the way you said stuff you got and then you said what you did you the thing
Amanda, I like the way you talked about what happen in your life.
dear devan,
i really like your second poem its so true in fact but also true through spirit.That is so true i likr it so much!!
hey john i think that those r great poems
1.riding horses i feel happy,free
2. I am strong because I'm idependent
3.warmth of the sun beating down
MB
dear megan i liked how you used imagery
el
dear devan i liked how you talked about your dog
el
dear amanda i love how you talked about your new house
el
their is a lot of drama in the world
MB
dear amanda i liked how you talked about your parents devvorced mine are divorced to it gets sad sometimes.
dear emily i liked how your setup in the poems are.
1. my mom, my dad loves me
2. my doctor, my denstist feel me
3. my dog, my cat heart me
1.My snowmobile is fast on the snow.
2.THe cold makes me really cold.
3.i like to building big building
tyler ur poems are preety nice to all the things that happen to the school withwe need to have a stop to them
tyler you are right about bullying never stops
Bang it runs then its dinner
Heart beats fast goes even faster
real it in it is big
Life really bites,bite it back.
1. For sale: dog leash, barley used.
2. Family scrapbooks are thiner than paper.
3.Freinds phone number fill one page.
Don't waste time thinking about.
Nicole said...
The day god called u home
tears fall, still hurting, now stoping
your death now my hearts death
1.Blood poured from my broken head
2.When did you peel the bannana
3.I got my Jr.Black Belt
Some times are tough, oh well.
1.I miss my real friends, really!
2.School is so sad,WHY!
3.The marriage of my mom!
hey melon head dylan wat do your poems reallhy mean
yo this is off the hizzzy great job
Jump for joy, school is done.
New York Giants, Superbowl champians again.
Food is my very good friend.
1.It doesn't matter anymore, aboutt anything
2.Hate is powerless; but love is strong
3.Pain:13 stitches in the head.OUCH!:D
1)So fun. Not.So very boring.
2)Great. Another Monday. Wish today's Friday
3)Netbooks fun. School. So not!.
I hate the drama at fa
I hate people being bullyed here
people need to be nice here
-CB
school....boring but its life
dog dying..now what to do
pain hurts don't want to cry
EL
tyler I agree with youthe drama is a big thing
Now with the bullying doesn't have any stop to it and it need to stop
and Ibet your niece is a budle of smiles
-cmb
1. Poems: hard, not fun, not easy.
2. Football: hard, tiring, hurts, injury, fun.
3. Graphic novels: action, violence, pictures, fun.
--Tao
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